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体裁类比突破(2) ——告知信 邀请信 第2课时 一、“告知信”写作增分指导 [写作题目] (2020·浙江7月高考改编)假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．询问近况；　2.分享班级最新消息； 3．表达祝愿。 注意：1 ．词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] Dear Peter， We're very sorry to hear that you asked for sick leave and returned to Ireland the other day. Have you been getting much better now? We all miss you very much and hope you will recover soon. Here is some good news for you. As expected, we won the first place in our school art festival yesterday. The drama you directed got a big hand. It was well reviewed by judges because of its perfect plots as well as our wonderful performance. We owed our success to your kind and patient guidance. It was you who should walk onto the stage and receive the award. Wish you a full recovery soon and look forward to seeing you again. Yours， Li Hua 学亮点写法 1．学亮丽开头 开头使用We're very sorry to hear that ...很自然地引出老师生病这一背景，接下来用一个疑问句和一个陈述句表达了对老师的关心、想念和祝福，体现了邮件中语言的交流互动感。其中，现在完成进行时have been doing结构运用得非常准确。 2．学高级表达 (1)使用高级词块，如：ask for sick leave, the other day, get a big hand, as well as, owe ...to ..., a full recovery等，体现了作者娴熟的语言表达技巧和能力。 (2)准确运用高级句式，如：省略结构As expected；省略关系词的定语从句you directed；强调句结构It was you who ...，充分表达了对老师的感激之情。 3．学精彩结尾 在文章的结尾，作者用wish开头的祈使句结尾，呼应第一段，再次祝愿老师早日康复，感情真挚，符合写作背景。 4．学情感表达 本邮件第二段作者通过分享班级最新消息来表达对老师的感激之情，与第一段和尾段表达对老师的关心与想念之情融为一体，邮件全文充满了浓浓师生情，行文流畅。 [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：简要说明写信目的 1．Learning that you want/desire/would like to ...，I'm writing to inform you of/get you informed of relevant information/I'm writing to let you know that ... 2．Delighted/Thrilled to learn that you are planning to ..., I'd like to briefly introduce ...to you. 3．As for your last letter asking/requiring about ..., I am delighted to tell you something in details. 4．News reaches me that you are willing to ..., and I can hardly wait to keep you informed of the following details. Ⅱ.主体部分：详细