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写作主题五　请求帮助  [题目] 试一试——查找失分短板 (2021·全国甲卷改编)假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1．阐明写信事由；　2.征求建议；　3.表示感谢。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．求助内容表述过少 部分考生在写作时，就“征求建议”这一求助要点常常一句话带过，使主要要点变成了次要要点，如只用Will you tell me some traditional Chinese cultures that interest foreign friends？这一问句来征求建议。 2．求助语言不够委婉 有些考生在写作时很容易忽略求助语言的委婉表达。请写出一些向对方征求建议时的礼貌用语： _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Could you give me some advice on ...？/I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me instant feedback./I sincerely want you to offer me some advice./Would you like to give us your suggestions? 记一记——常用写作范式 Dear ________， My name is __________________.I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.(说明自己身份，点明写信目的) I have much difficulty/trouble in __________________ (交代自己面临的困难). Besides, I'm very upset that ________________ (提出具体令自己苦恼的问题)．What's more, I don't know ________________ (进一步说明自己的困境). I'm wondering if you could be so kind as to ________________ (请求对方帮助)．In the meantime/At the same time, I beg you to ____________________________ (再次请求对方的帮助)． I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. I'm looking forward to your early reply.(表达感谢，并希望对方早日回复) Yours sincerely， Li Hua 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①I am writing to ask for your help. ②I am writing in the hope of your assistance in ... ③I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. ④I wonder if you could spare some time to help me. ⑤I am anxious to get help from you. ⑥Would you like to do me a favor to ...? ⑦Would you please be kind enough to offer me some help? 　[主体常用语] ①I have some difficulties in ... ②What I am worried about a lot is that ... ③I