专题五 写作主题七 表达谢意（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（新教材）

写作主题七　表达谢意 试一试——查找失分短板 [题目] (2019·浙江6月高考)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢；　 2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；　 3．临别祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Alex， ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．出现时态混乱 本邮件涉及多种时态的表达，如果考生对时态运用关注不到位，则易出现时态错用现象。请用正确的时态补全下面句子。 ①Hearing that you __________(return) to your country very soon, I ___________(write) to extend my sincere gratitude for your warmhearted help with my English learning. will return am writing ②I still remember what you _____________(devote) to improving my oral English and English writing. ③Actually, without your help, I ____________________(make) rapid progress in English. have devoted would not have made 2．漏写帮助效果 本邮件的主体段应该回顾Alex给予的帮助，有些考生通常罗列几项对方给予的帮助，而忽略对帮助带来的效果进行表述。 记一记——常用写作范式 Dear ________， I am writing to convey my gratitude for ________________ (感谢的原因)． Guided by you, I had a chance to __________________ (对方给予的帮助一). Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that ________________ (帮助的效果). What's more, ________________ (对方给予的帮助二及效果)． Thanks again for your generous help.(再次表示感谢) I'm expecting __________________ (发出回报式邀请). Yours， Li Hua 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for ... ②I am writing to let you know how lucky I am to have you as ... ③I want to extend my gratitude to you for ... ④I'm writing to thank you for picking up my lost wallet and returning it to me. ⑤I'm glad to write to extend my gratitude for your generous help. 　[主体常用语] ①It is/was you who first ... ②If it had not been for your help, I wouldn't have ... ③On the one hand, the help/advice you gave me makes ... ④On the other hand, it helps me know how to do ... ⑤All in all, with your help/advice, I ... ⑥Never will I forget ... ⑦Without your help, I would/could not have ... ⑧You not only ...but also ... ⑨I still remember the days when ...