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写作主题六 事情告知
试一试——查找失分短板
[题目]
(2021·天津6月高考改编)假如你是晨光中学的李津,你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
1.表示感谢并问候;
2.计划与家人一起做的事情;
3.你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Nancy,
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
醒一醒——常见失分探因
1.计划要做的事情缺乏实际意义
考生对本话题很熟悉,有话可说,但是有不少考生表达计划要做的事情时很随意,缺乏现实意义,如:
My mother and I are going to do a big shop, where I can get all my favorite things.
2.对“选专业”要点理解有误
有些考生把题目要求中的“对所选专业做何准备”误解为“应该怎么做准备”,如:
Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or ask teachers for consultation.
记一记——常用写作范式
Dear ________,
How is everything going? I'm writing to inform you of ________________ (某事/某种情况).
In order to/To ________________ (某事/某情况的目的),we will ________________ (事情或情况的内容一). Besides, ________________ (事情或情况的内容二). Anyway, ______________ (补充某事/某情况的其他细节).
Wish you all the best. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.(表达祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
背一背——高分靓点表达
[开头常用语]
①I am writing to express my great pleasure to ...
②I'm sorry to learn from your email that ...
③I am writing to share with you the experiences in ...
④I am Li Hua.I am writing to keep you informed that there will be ...
⑤I'm writing to tell you something about the ...
⑥Knowing you've intended to ..., I'm more than delighted to inform you that ...
⑦I am glad to receive your letter and thank you again for your concern.
[主体常用语]
①We have made various arrangements for you.
②I'm fully convinced that it will ...
③In spite of this, I first felt a little nervous because of ...
④The exam is to begin on the morning of ...
⑤As is posted, the class begins at ...and ends at ...in ...
⑥Finally, you might as well take ...because ...
⑦At about ..., we'll visit ...following a guide.
⑧The visit will be over at ..., and then we'll return ...
⑨Appreciating ...will also add fuel to your enthusiasm.
⑩First, you can sign up for ...by calling the club o