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写作主题八　演讲文稿 试一试——查找失分短板 [题目] (2021·全国乙卷改编)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1．分析优势与不足； 2．提出学习建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Be smart online learners Good morning, everyone， It's a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled “Be smart online learners”． ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．“建议”未能与“不足”相联系 考生在写作时通常对显性要点十分关注，但往往会忽略显性要点之间的隐性联系，如：作文列举的建议应该是针对前面分析的不足之处而提出的解决方案。如果忽略了这层关系，作文的内在联系和行文逻辑性会随之降低。请针对下面的不足，提出你的有效建议： Disadvantage: Online learning can be difficult for some students without self­control and self­discipline. Tips： ①________________________________________________________ _________________________ ②_____________________________________________________ ________________________________ Get organized and set some learning small goals that inspire you to keep focused all the time. Making a schedule is a must, for good time management will contribute to improve our efficiency. 2．结尾忽略与题目相照应 考生在结束写作时应该呼应题目主题，这样可以使整篇作文行文连贯，意义完整。否则，会因为作文结构松散，主题不明确而被扣分。 记一记——常用写作范式 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen， I'm very honoured today to have the opportunity to share my opinions on ____________ (演讲主题)． As is known to all, __________________ (主题相关的某个现象)．However, there are ____________________ (反映的问题). In my opinion, it is a problem about ________________ (分析问题)． How can we solve it then? (承上启下，引出针对问题的解决方法) For one thing, ____________________ (方法一). For another, ______________ (方法二)．What's more, ________________ (补充说明或其他方法)． Therefore, let's take the responsibility to ________________(总结全文或呼应主题)．Come on and put it into action. (号召行动) Thanks for listening. 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①Dear teachers and students, may I have your attention please? ②I'm Li Hua.It's my great honor to have the opportunity to say something about ... ③Ladies and gentlemen, I am glad t