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人教版九年级上册必背作文8篇(含解析)
1.假设你有一个名叫Tom的好朋友,进入初三后他变化了很多,请根据以下表格内容介绍一下他在学习、生活中的成长变化,写一篇100词左右的作文。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
(2)内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
(3)100词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Tom is my good friend._______________________________________________________
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【答案】 Tom is my good friend. He has changed a lot.① Let me introduce what he has changed.
He is 15 years old boy. And he is a student in a middle school. He is in Class 1, Grade 9. ②Yellow is his favorite color, because he thinks that yellow can cheer him up. He used to has a lot of homework. He has no choice but to stay up late. He used to play computer games, and he refused to talking with his parents. But now he want to live a good day. He makes a good plan every day. And he studys hard, he is strict with his study. He is more confident than before. He joins the School basketball team.
He want to to be a famous basketball player all over the world. Because he loves basketball very much and he wants to be famous.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇作文,主要讲述的是我的朋友汤姆的变化,过去与现在的变化,写作时要注意运用时态和用词,可以适当增加衔接词,使文章可以通顺。
【亮点词汇】① changed a lot改变很多
② have no choice but别无选择
③all over the world全世界
【高分句型】①Let me introduce what he has changed(Let 让字句)②Yellow is his favorite color, because he thinks that yellow can cheer him up. (because连接的原因状语从句)
【结构布局】①总起开头,告诉读者自己要介绍的话题。
②接下来介绍汤姆过去的表现,以及他现在的变化
③介绍他将来要做什么
【拓展词汇】① all over the world② strict with
【拓展句型】①Let me introduce what he has changed.
2.书面表达
Karen 和Kelly是好朋友,请根据表格内容写一篇关于她们的短文,其中包括两人的相同点和不同点以及两人上周的活动和感受。
要求:1.包括所有提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 2.不少于 60词.
name
相同点
不同点
上周的活动
Karen
1. 都有长的黑色的头发
2. 一样高
3. 都喜欢看电影。每周去Screen city 两次,因为有最舒服的座位。
Karen更外向,受欢迎得多。
一起爬山,拍了很多照片
感受...
Kelly
Kelly更友好,成绩也更好,更擅长画画。
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【答案】karen has a good friend whose named Kelly. They are in the same. They have a black long hair. Karen is tall as Kelly. They are all like