内容正文:
应用文写作
道歉信
CONTENTS
1
2
Part one
Part two
写作谋篇
课堂实战
1
Writing method guidance
写作谋篇
Step1
明确体裁话题
——应用文,道歉信
Step2
确定时态人称
——一般现在时,第一人称
Step3
布局文章结构
——首段、中段、尾段
Step4
列出核心要点
——表示歉意、出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施、再次致歉
假定你是红星中学的学生李华,你和留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,你因故不能赴约。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示歉意; (2)说明原因; (3)另约时间。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Sample
Text
structures
Li Hua’s apology
首段
中段
尾段
express apology
I can’t go to the bookstore with you
the reason
make another appointment
express apology again
Para. 1
I am writing to express my regret that .
Please accept my sincere apology for .
I would like to give you my apology for .
I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon
not going to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon
not going to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon
Para. 2
The reason that I fail to is that .
原因: 周五要开会
弥补措施:另约时间
你介意我把约会时间改到下周六早上吗?
Would you mind if I Next Saturday morning?
go to the bookstore with you
I have to attend a meeting this Friday
change the appointment time to
Para. 2
弥补措施:另约时间
如果你方便的话,我们下周六早上再一起去书店?
If it is convenient for you, let’s have another appointment to .
go to the bookstore next Saturday morning
Para. 3
再次致歉
希望你能接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
再次为我的缺席造成的不便表示歉意,并向你致以最美好的祝福。
Sorry again for your inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you .
Para. 3
再次致歉
我再次对造成的不便表示歉意。
Once again, I am sorry for my inconvenience c