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第一部分 高频话题专练 话题11 健康与安全 话题写作指导 山东英语RJ 英语 1 典例精选 （2023滨州）假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这个问题的见解。 参考词汇: diet（v.节食）, appearance（n.外貌）, inner beauty（内在美） 2 Dear Li Hua, I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan? Can you give me some advice? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Amy 3 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分； 4. 80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 4 Dear Amy, I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting. _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5 写作剖析 一、细审题 1.文体：本文是写一份回信，文体为________； 2.人称：给予对方建议，用第____人称； 3.时态：介绍具体的做法，用____________。 应用文 二 一般现在时 6 二、备素材 1.________________________没必要做…… 2.______________关心 3._________认为 4._____________内在美 5.___________________保持健康的饮食 there is no need to do… care about/for think of inner beauty keep a healthy diet 7 6.________________远离 7.______________均衡的饮食 8._____________早起 9.________________________定期做运动 10._________________对某人有帮助 stay away from balanced diet get up early do some sports regularly be helpful to sb. 8 三、搭框架 9 四、成语篇 Dear Amy, I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting. _________________________________________________________ As you mentioned in the letter, I have some advice for you. 10 ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _____________________________