内容正文:
Module 1 Feelings and impressions
模块话题满分范文必背
1.感恩是一种精神财富,也是一种品德情怀。在你成长的路上,有太多的人在你身后默默地支持与付出。我校开展主题为“成长路上,感恩有他(她)”的征文活动,请你结合自身经历写一篇英语短文谈谈你最想感激的人及原因,并表达你对他(她)的感激之情。
要求:
1. 无须翻译作文材料;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 不少于80词。
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【答案】
例文
Thank you, my mother
I would like to share my personal experience and express my gratitude for my mother.
My mother is an excellent woman who is always there for me throughout my life. She offers her time and energy to make sure that I have a comfortable life. She supports me in every decision I make, encourages me during difficult times, and celebrates all of my happy moments. Through her actions rather than words alone, she taught me valuable life lessons.
In conclusion, her love has shaped who I am. I will continue treasuring every moment spent with her while trying my best to make her proud.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。点明你想要感激的人。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从感激他(她)的原因、表达你对他(她)的感激之情开展写作,涵盖所提示的要点。
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① personal experience 自身经历
② gratitude 感激
③ make sure 确保
④ rather than 而不是
⑤ in conclusion 总之
[高分句型]
① In conclusion, her love has shaped who I am.(who引导的宾语从句)
② I will continue treasuring every moment spent with her while trying my best to make her proud.(while引导的时间状语从句)
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