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It was just before 8 am, October 17. Pam Bales stepped onto the snow⁃covered Jewell Trail (小路). She planned a six⁃hour climbing hike through New Hampshires Mount Washington State Park. She had packed for almost every accident, including clothes, heat packs, a bottle of hot chocolate ... (装备,伏笔) And she intended to walk alone. A piece of paper on the dashboard of her car detailed her trip: start up Jewell Trail and return to her car before some forecasted bad weather arrives. Pam always left her hiking plans in her car. She was a volunteer on the Pemigewasset Valley Search and Rescue Team.(说明身份,伏笔)
At 10:30 am, the weather was showing its teeth.(天气,伏笔) Pam added even more clothes to protect herself from the cold winds and fog. (加衣) Then she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her. (一个人的脚印,伏笔) Shed been following faint tracks all day and hadnt given them much thought, because so many people climbed Jewell Trail. But these, she realised, had been made by a pair of trainers.
By 11 am, Pam was getting cold, despite moving fast. She put on an extra top. (再次加衣) Good thing I packed heavy, she thought. She decided to abandon her plan. Returning to her car was a requirement. Strong gusts of wind attacked her back and left side and the only thing keeping her on Gulfside Trail was the tracks in the snow. (天气,伏笔) As she fought the wind and heavy sleet, her eyes searching for some type of shelter, the tracks made a hard left⁃hand turn off the trail.
All of a sudden, she felt alarmed. She was sure the hiker could lose his way and was heading straight toward the challenging trails of the Great Gulf. Pam followed the tracks carefully. She rounded a corner and saw a man sitting motionlessbeside a stone. He stared in the direction of Great Gulf. She approachedhim. His head was bare. He looked soaking wet. Thick frost covered his jacket. As his eyes tracked her slowly, he barely turned his head.(