内容正文:
Unit 1 What’s the matter?
单元话题满分范文必背
1.你的朋友Jim非常喜欢玩游戏。由于长时间玩电脑游戏,现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛,并且晚上睡不好觉。请你写一篇英语短文,介绍一下他的情况,并指出你对他的建议。
具体要求:
1. 内容包含上述所提供的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 书写认真,句子通顺,语法正确;
3. 词数:80词左右。
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【答案】例文
Jim is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Jim的基本情况;
第二步,阐述自己给出的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②in the same way以同样的方式
③do eye exercises做眼保健操
[高分句型]
①I think he shoul