内容正文:
应用文评分标准
三方面
形式(书写、格式)
内容(开头、正文、结尾)
语言
01
内容要点的完整性
02
语句段落的连贯性
03
词汇句式的多样性
04
语言表达的准确性
应用文到底考什么?
形式和内容
形式:书写
形式常见问题
We know design , and know how to more useful
1、书写:字迹潦草、卷面不整洁、涂改太多、单词与单词之间的间距不一致
2、段落:没有分段,要么段落太多,要么就是一段式,牢记三段式!!!!然后就是首行缩进两个字符即可,不是两个单词。
做题步骤:第一步审题
审题!!!!!至少要花三分钟时间,题目是关键!怎么审
第二步:构思(7min)
制作思维导图(同时把内容和语言结合)
范文:
Dear Jonas,
Sorry to hear that you had trouble in getting used to the campus life here, I'm rather willing to give you some suggestions.
Firstly, you had better participate in more activities, through which you'll know more people and make friends with them easily. As for study, I recommend that you should ask teachers and classmates for help when you are faced with difficulties. Not only will you get the warmest help, but also you can practice your oral Chinese.
If you have any other questions, feel free to ask me and I'll always be there for you. Hope everything goes well.
Yours,
Li Hua
第三步:写作(10min)
指出问题不适用学校生活
表达写信目的:给建议
交朋友的建议+理由
交友建议+好处
结尾:表达意愿
如何记应用文笔记
step1
step2
积累和通用表达相关的句子短语,即万能句
积累和话题相关的句式和短语
体裁/通用相关表达
话题相关表达
Para 1
开门见山
【建议信第一句】
了解对方情况+写信目的(给你一些建议)
(1)Sorry to hear that +从句(对方的困难)
(2)I‘m rather willing to give you some suggestions.
适应一个新环境
get used to the new environment
补充短语:
适应:adapt to
【要点1:
乐意做某事 XX be willing to (doing) sth
给某人意见 give/offer(提供)sb. some suggestions/advice
体裁/通用相关表达
话题相关表达
Para 2
交友建议+好处
【建议+好处】
你最好...... ,通过做这件事你将+具体好处
You had better do ... , through which you’ll...
(2)I‘m rather willing to give you some suggestions.
怎么交朋友——多积极参加活动
play/take an active part in more activities
participate in
更容易交朋友
make friends more easily
【要点1:逻辑词——firstly】
乐意做某事 XX be willing to (doing) sth
给某人意见 give/offer(提供)sb. some suggestions/advice
体裁/通用相关表达
话题相关表达