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四种表达类型
第一部分 类型解析
类型1:写人叙事
【真题解析】(2020·泸州中考)
泸州是全国文明城市, 我们应从身边小事做起, 成为文明泸州人。请你根据以下要点提示, 以“To Be a Better Citizen (市民)”为题, 用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 爱护环境, 不乱扔垃圾等;
2. 注意安全, 遵守交通规则, 不私自下河、塘游泳等;
3. 锻炼身体, 养成良好的生活习惯等;
4. 对人友善, 乐于助人等;
5. 其他……
要求: 1. 词数110左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及, 可适当增加内容;
3. 字迹工整, 卷面整洁, 文意连贯, 语言流畅;
4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语: protect, environment, litter, traffic rules, living habits
【写作分析】
1. 审主题: 由标题可知本文的主题就是“To Be a Better Citizen”。
2. 审人称: 由题干中的“我们”可判断本文以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 根据提示要点可判断本文主要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
To Be a Better Citizen
Luzhou is a national civilized city. As a citizen, we should take pride in our city. And I think we have lots of things to do if we want to be a civilized citizen.
Firstly, it’s our duty to protect the environment because we live here every day. We mustn’t throw litter everywhere. Instead we can put it in the dustbins. Secondly, we should keep ourselves safe all the time. For example, following the traffic rules, not swimming in the river or the pool by ourselves. Thirdly, try to develop a good living habit. We had better play sports for at least one hour a day and don’t stay up too late. Fourthly, we are supposed to be friendly to others, and be ready to help others. Last but not least, we should respect our parents and help them do more housework.
If we follow these, we will be better citizens. And I hope our city will be better and better tomorrow.
【突破策略】
策略1: 巧借小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂, 但在英语中可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词为书面表达高频词汇: talk, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kid, help等。
策略2: 巧用高级词汇
为了增加中考书面表达的亮点, 增强其表达效果, 可以使用高级词汇来代替一般词汇。例如:
now/today→nowadays decide→make one’s mind/ make a decision
should→be supposed to besides→what’s more/in addition
good→excellent/wonderful sb. think(s)→in one’s opinion
策略3: 句式灵活变换
采用丰富的英语句式结构可以增强文章的表达效果, 能够凸显作者深厚的英语语言功底。被动语态、非谓语动词、主从复合句以及特殊句型的使用, 均能够收到很好的效果。例如: It’s our duty to protect the environment。另外, 适当使用英语谚语、格言也会使文章更