期末Modules 6-10范文2023-2024学年外研版七年级英语上册

20分作文评分标准 1、 评分原则 1. 先采意定档，后踩点给分。 2. 使用较复杂的句子结构或高级词汇，根据所给信息或文章内容进行适当的拓展的，该作文可适当在同一文档中取较高分值。 2、 评分标准 第五档（优）18-20分 很好的完成了规定的写作任务，内容涵盖完整并有拓展，语言流畅，句式多样，文章结构清晰，衔接自然，语法正确，词汇丰富，书写规范（如大小写、拼写、标点符号等）。 如有极个别非关键的单词错误（如名词单复数、冠词、大小写、拼写等错误），视数量扣分。 第四档（良）16-17.5分 较好的完成了规定的写作任务，文章结构清晰，格式正确，书写较为规范（如大小写、拼写、标点符号等）。内容完整，已合理补充作文要求的拓展内容，但句式单一或有少量语言错误。 第三档（中）12-15.5分 能使用合理的人称、正确的时态，所表达的内容基本完整，能够形成可读性的句子，基本能传递信息，有一定的可读性，但逻辑性不强，语句欠通顺，有较多的语言错误。 第二档（差）6.5-11.5分 能正确抄写所有提示内容，尝试使用正确的时态结构来表达，但文章内容残缺不全，只有个别句子有可读性，有很多语言错误，句子成碎片化堆砌，格式不够正确，书写欠规范。 第一档（极差）0-6分 能抄写提示内容；内容严重残缺不全，基本没有传递语言信息的句子，表达错误很多，书写极不规范。 M6 Animals Hello, everyone! You can see many kinds of animals in the zoo, such as zebras, lions, pandas and so on. My favourite animal is the deer. There is a deer called Meimei, it’s only three years old. I like it very much because it is very cute and clever. It comes from China, so it’s a Chinese animal. It eats leaves as well as grass for food, they are its favourite. But it doesn’t like meat, so it’s not dangerous. It usually lives in groups. It is brown and it has four strong legs, it is good at running. I think the deer is very lovely and clever, so I like it best. What about you? M7 Computers I am a student. There is a computer in my home, and my family shares it together. I often use the computer to do my homework after school. I also search for information or listen to music on the Internet. I can play computer games at the weekend, but my mother doesn’t like it. My father is a manager of a company, and he uses the computer to send emails to customers every day. He says the computer is very useful for his work. My mother is a doctor so she usually uses it to make documents for her work. Sometimes she learn to cook on the computer. She likes to download music on the Internet, but she doesn’t like to use it too much. She thinks it is bad for her eyes. My sister is a teacher and she often watches movies on the Internet. She uses the computer to make PPTs for her teaching almost every day