续写之帮妹妹克服恐惧和不安讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

续写之帮妹妹克服恐惧和不安  故事主要讲述了一个哥哥和他的妹妹在乡下度过一晚，妹妹因为害怕黑暗而情绪不稳定。哥哥试图通过给妹妹读有关仙女的书来安慰她，并最终找到了一段文字，让妹妹觉得安心和放松。这个故事强调了家庭中亲情的重要性和兄弟姐妹之间的相互支持。通过哥哥的安慰和安排，妹妹最终感到安全和放松，度过了愉快的夜晚。此外，故事中的自然元素也突出了环境对情绪和感受的影响。总的来说，这个故事注重于展现家庭成员之间的关系，以及如何通过积极的方式帮助他人克服恐惧和不安。 读后续写难度适中，用第一人称的角度讲述了哥哥Mike通过讲睡前故事的方式，帮助妹妹Meg克服夜晚怕黑的故事。在语言运用上，原文对于人物动作、语言和心理描写细致，其实也在提示着考生在续写中与原文风格保持一致。此外，值得注意的是，通过原文的细节信息分析，可得知所续写故事中的tiny fairies就是fireflies萤火虫。考生要注意在设计上详略得当，在续写中突出小女孩Meg的情绪转变。 续写原文品读 续写原文     My little sister, Meg, said that she wasn't afraid of the dark anymore and she'd be OK staying with Aunt Lily in the country. "As long as you’re there, Mike," she had said. Still, Mum was worried. Meg had never slept away from home, away from the city. So I told Mum I could handle everything.     我妹妹梅格说她不再害怕黑暗了，她会在乡下和莉莉阿姨待得很好。“只要有你在，迈克，”她说。即便如此，妈妈还是很担心。梅格从未离开过家，在城市之外过夜。所以我告诉妈妈我可以处理一切。     Even though we were only staying overnight, Meg had brought six books--all about fairies(仙女).After we unpacked, Aunt Lily invited us to pick some flowers. As we followed her through the forest, Meg held my hand tightly. But once we reached the sunlit grassland, she let go.“Butterflies!” whispered Meg. She screamed with delight when one flew near her.     虽然我们只在这里过夜，梅格带来了六本有关仙女的书。我们一到达，莉莉阿姨就邀请我们去采些花。我们跟着她穿过森林，梅格紧紧地握着我的手。但是一旦我们走到阳光普照的草地上，她放开了手。“蝴蝶！”梅格低声说着。当一只蝴蝶飞到她附近时，她高兴地尖叫起来。     Maybe I had nothing to worry about, I thought. I still remembered when I was here last summer, I found some amazing insects, like fireflies(萤火虫) and walking sticks which I'd never seen in the city. "Fairies are magical. See these beautiful flowers they grow!" she kept telling absolutely everything she knew about fairies. I was glad that if she kept it up until bedtime, then maybe she'd fall right to sleep.     也许我无需担心，我想。我还记得去年夏天我在这里时，发现了一些令人惊奇的昆虫，比如萤火虫和我在城市从未见过的竹节虫。“仙女是神奇的。看这些美丽的花它们生长！”她不停地讲述她所知道的一切关于仙女的事。我庆幸，如果她一直保持这样的状态直到睡觉时，也许她会立刻睡着。     Meg did keep chatting, right through supper. Then the sun began to set. “Does it get really dark out here at night?" she asked. He