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人教版 八年级上 单元主题写作 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time! 一、话题分析 能描述青少年在生活中遇到的困难及其内心的感受和事情的后果,能针对问题提出建议。 二、写作方法 “陈述+ 分析+ 建议”三步法写问题建议类作文 第一步:陈述问题。用简单的语言概述一下对方遇到的困扰,对对方的苦恼表示理解。 第二步:分析问题。 针对所提出的问题进行分析。 第三步:提出建议。呼应开头,重申观点,并表达美好的祝愿。 三、素材积累 (一) 写问题建议类作文常用词汇: advice // understanding // sad // wonder // should // share// teenager // expert // advise // unless // step// have problems with // care about // for no reason (二) 写问题建议类作文常用句型: 开头句 1. I’m sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents. 2. It’s normal to feel worried before exams. 中间句 1. If you have problems, you can talk to a person you trust. 2. You should call your best friend and talk with him or her. 结尾句 1. All in all, it’s easy to get along well with your parents as long as you try your best. 2. Hope everything goes well with you. 四、写作任务 假设你叫刘明,是美国中学生艾丽斯的朋友,你收到了她的电子邮件,请给她回复,回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。 要求: 不少于70 词(短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。 Hi Liu Ming, I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice 【写作模板】 陈述问题 Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. 分析问题 I think if she really needs the money, you’d better ... If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid ... 提出建议 I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So ... 【高分作文】 Hi Alice, I’m glad to hear from you. _ _ I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Liu Ming _ Hi Alice, I’m glad to hear from you. Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend. _ I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to