2024届高考英语高分写作方法指导（二）课件

2024届新高考英语 高分写作方法指导(二) 方法:使用无灵主语 除了用情绪作主语,还可以用五官等等作主语刻画人物情感 五官及相关名词作主语-刻画情绪 Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。 Her face lit up/brightened/glowed.她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。 A bright smile appeared.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 His mouth widened to a smile.他的咧开嘴笑了。 We laughter our mouths dropped open in surprise.我们惊讶地张大了嘴。 My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。 Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。 Her words pierced my heart.她的话刺痛了我的心。 His words sent me a quiver through my body.他的话让我浑身一颤。 Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。 His eyes never left mine.他一刻不停地盯着我。 Her eyes brimmed with tears.她热泪盈眶。[brim v.(使)满,盛满] His eyes widened with horror.他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。 His eyes scanned the room as he entered.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。 His eyes dropped to his lap as he answered.他回答时垂下眼睛看着膝上。 When she saw the strawberries, her eyes twinkled/sparkled with joy and sweetness. 当她看到草莓时,她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。 Tears slid down/were running down her cheeks. 泪水顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。 Tears blurred her eyes/vision. 泪水模糊了她的双眼。 When he saw the familiar handwriting,tears welled up in his eyes. 他一看到熟悉的字迹,便热泪盈眶。 心作主语-刻画情绪 心 heart Her heart is beating fast.她的心跳的很快。 Her heart leaped with joy.她的心高兴得都要跳出来了。 My heart began to thump wildly.我的心开始狂跳起来。 [thump v.重击,捶打] His heart thumped with fear. 她的心因为害怕而砰砰直跳。 Her heart was pounding with excitement. 她的心激动地砰砰直跳。 He smiled and her heart melted. 他笑了,她的心融化了。 My heart seemed to miss a beat. 我的心跳仿佛停了一下。 Inside, his heart was slowly breaking. 在内心,他的心在慢慢地碎裂。 My heart aches when I think of their sorrow. 当我想到他们的悲痛时,我的心很痛。 自然现象作主语:渲染情绪 The thick fog blanketed the field. 浓雾笼罩着整个大地。 Dusk found the boy crying on the street. 黄昏时,男孩在大街上哭着。 Night approaching,darkness ruled the whole forest. 夜幕降临,黑暗笼罩着整个森林。 An earthquake came like a thief in the night,without warning. 地震到来,犹如夜贼,不作预告。 The rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon. 雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。 时间作主语:概括事件/场景转换 Recent years have seen more and more foreign students come to st