探究“作文修改”、“话题拓展”和“以写促读” 讲义-2024届高考英语二轮复习

探究“作文修改”、“话题拓展”和“以写促读” 一、序言 英语作文题目以朋友冲突解决建议，话题贴近学生生活，反映了学生日常问题，且能很好考查学生的思维能力。该作文我认为对2024年高考有很好的复习导向作用，具有很强的靶向性。人际关系，特别是同伴关系的和谐相处，非常重要，也往往是当今学生们面临的普遍性问题。同时，通过该话题，还可以拓展延伸到孩子与父母的关系、孩子与老师的关系。 二、习作修改 你校英文报正在征集关于朋友之间冲突的文章。请写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 描述现象； 2. 分析原因并提出建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 The original version Conflicts Between Friends As teenagers, we occasionally run into the conflicts between friends, which significantly impact our mood and academic performance. Some students even suffer from isolation and depression caused by the conflicts. Inevitably, these conflicts do occur in our adolescence, when matters that hurt our feelings or blow our self-esteem like mean words, inappropriate jokes or the lack of communication will lead to them. Therefore, it’s vital to tackle the problem rationally. Firstly, after a conflict, you should calm down and reflect on yourself, giving time to digest anger and insanity. Secondly, a sincere apology made in a letter, where you should be frank, will contribute a lot to mend your relationship. Additionally, it is trusting that helps maintain the friendship and avoid conflicts. Friends are a person’s invaluable treasures. Hope you can make it through the conflicts and have a long-lasting friendship. The revised version Conflicts Between Friends It is common for us teenagers to encounter conflicts between friends, which may greatly affect our mood and even academic performance. Worse still, some students even suffer isolation and depression as a result of the conflicts. Many factors may bring about the conflicts. Some small things like mean words, inappropriate jokes or communication may hurt our feelings or blow our self-esteem. Therefore, it’s vital to tackle the problem reasonably. Firstly, after a conflict, we should cool off and reflect on what we have done, taking a break to digest the anger and insanity. Secondly, a sincere apology of letter, where we should be frank, will definitely contribute a lot to mending the relationship. Th