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unit 7单元写作
写作主题:如何写保护野生动物的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是"世界知识",要求学生学会写保护野生动物的文章。学生可以利用本单元学到的知识来介绍一种或几种珍稀野生动物的现状,并谈谈如何保护它们。在写作时,要正确使用基数词以及形容词和副词的比较级和最高级。
2经典名题
(2020遵义中考)2020 年 3 月 3 日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日",我国提出了"维护全球生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80 词左右的书信。
要求:1.信中包含所给信息内容;2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:symbol(n.象征),destroy(v.破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi.
Yours,
Xixi
3.写作思维导图
审题
体裁
应用文(书信)
话题
保护野生动物
时态
以一般现在时为主
人称
以第一人称为主
段落
布局
I'm 13 years old.
I come from Sichuan, China.
About myself I am a national treasure of China
and a symbol of China.
I like to... I like... best.
People often destroy my home...
My problems My friends are fewer and fewer...
My favorite food is getting less and less.
My hope I hope human friends can...
参考词汇
one of... ..之一;a symbol of... ..的一个象征;come from 来自;
play with 和……玩耍;move around 四处走动;cut down 砍倒
参考句子
1. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China.
我是中国的国宝,并且是中国的一个象征。
2. The number of... is getting smaller and smaller.……的数量正变得越来越少。
3. People often destroy my home.人们经常破坏我的家园。
4. I hope you can give me more space to live in.
我希望你们能给我更多的生活空间。
5. If you can cut down fewer trees, I will....
如果你们能少砍些树木,我将会……
4.高分例文
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I'm one of your friends ——a panda. I come from Sichuan, China. I am 13 years old. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China.① I like to play with my friends in the tree. I like eating bamboo best. It's my favorite food.But I've had some problems recently. People often destroy my home and I don't have much room to move around. ②My friends are fewer and fewer and there is no one to play with me. I am very lonely. ②My favorite food is getting less and less.