Unit 2写作 2023-2024学年人教版英语八年级下册

unit 2 单元写作 写作主题：本单元学生应学习如何写提供帮助及志愿服务的相关文章 1 话题分析 本单元的话题是"提供帮助及志愿服务"，对培养学生的"责任与担当"这一素养能起到积极的作用。学生可通过一些志愿活动或慈善事业来树立自己的责任意识和社会意识、培养乐于参加公益事业的情怀。在写作方面，这一话题主要有两个方向：一是呼吁人们参加志愿工作；二是描述自己或他人参加过的志愿活动。 2.经典名题 假如你是李华。请给你加拿大的笔友 Eric写一封80 词左右的邮件，介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下： 时间：上周日；地点：学校附近的街区；活动内容：上午：打扫街道，帮助老人做家务下午：给小朋友们讲故事；感受：帮助别人是快乐的 参考词汇： 志愿者活动:volunteer activity ；街区: neighborhood；打扫街道: clean the street ；做家务: do housework；讲故事: tell stories ；帮助他人: help others Dear Eric How's it going? Yours, Li Hua 3.写作思维导图： 审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 志愿活动 时态 一般过去时 人称 第一人称 段落 布局 引出话题→what I've done these days Last Sunday: did some volunteer activities in the neighborhood near our school In the morning: cleaned the street; 叙述事件 helped the old do housework In the afternoon: told stories to the kids busy but very happy 总结感受 helping others can bring happiness not only... but also... 句子模板： 1. Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in... 上周日,我和我的朋友在……做了一些志愿者活动。 2. I'd like to help...我愿意帮助…… 3. I think we'd better...我认为我们最好…… 4. Helping others can bring us happiness.帮助他人能给我们带来快乐。 4.高分例文 Dear Eric How's it going?① You want to know what I've done these days. Now let me tell you. ②Last Sunday, my friends and I did some volunteer activities in the neighborhood near our school. In the morning, we cleaned the street. And then we went to the old people's home and helped the old there do housework. In the afternoon, we told stories to the kids in the children's home. That day, I was busy but very happy.③I think helping others can bring happiness not only for others but also for ourselves. Yours, Li Hua 例文分析：　　 本文要点齐全、结构合理、条理清晰、语句通顺，是一篇不错的习作。　 ①本句用了 want to do sth.结构,