内容正文:
Unit 8 Collecting things
单元话题满分范文必背
一、书面表达
1.请以“My collection is _______”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
(1)补全标题(参考词语: books,photos,footballs 等);
(2)词数 60 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范;
(4)鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分;
(5)作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。
My collection is __________
I love collecting. I am a collector of
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【答案】例文
My collection is coins
I love collecting. I am a collector of all kinds of coins. From ancient coins to modern foreign coins, I have formed my own habit. Since primary school, I have formed the habit of collecting coins. I remember the first coin I collected was brought by my father from England. It was a very lovely coin.
I like it very much. There is an elegant queen in the middle. There is a beautiful flower on it. I have loved it since then. Until now, there is a big box of my collection in my room. They are classified and dustproof, because I put them in a small crystal bag.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:补全题目,介绍自己的收藏,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目;
第二步,具体介绍这个收藏以及简单介绍来历。
[亮点词汇]
① all kinds of各种各样的
② since then自从那时
[高分句型]
I remember the first coin I collected was brought by my father from England. (定语从句,被动语态)
2.上周,我们班做了关于“My collections”的问卷调查。请根据下面的提示,写一篇英文短文,汇报你们小组成员的情况。
姓名
收藏品
起始时间
收藏品情况
收获
Jim
飞机模型
在7岁时
一些能飞起来
对科学更感兴趣了
Anna
明信片
5个月前
有许多风景名胜图
了解世界各地文化
Me
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注意:
1. 词数60 字左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
3. 参考词汇:culture