内容正文:
2021年全国乙卷书面表达
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足:
2.提出学习建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Online learning has become an important way to study recently._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
审题:
Q1. 什么是online learning? 你是如何理解的?它有哪些具体表现形式?(如学而思网课、网易公开课、慕课、疫情期间学校组织的网课、B站上的课程……)
Q2.利用搜索引擎查找信息属于online learning吗?online learning=the Internet吗?
Q3. Online learning的利弊有哪些?
头脑风暴
优势: 资源丰富、形式多样、灵活方便(不限时间地点)、可反复观看、满足个性化需求 、消除城乡差异……;
不足: 缺乏学习氛围,不利于缺乏自律的学生, 易分心走神、沉迷于游戏等, 学习效率低下;长时间盯着屏幕看危害视力和身体健康等。
建议: 指定学习目标、规划时间, 关闭其他社交媒体,劳逸结合,适当锻炼等。
谋篇布局:
Para 1 问候听众,说明发言、演讲主题;
Para 2 主体段(要点1):在线学习的利弊(写2-3点);
Para 3 主题段(要点2):提出学习建议(根据演讲题目可知应以第2个要点为主,写2-3点为宜);
Para 4 结束段:提出希望。
可用表达
资源丰富
possess abundant resources
have access to abundant resources
have/with an abundance of resources
形式多样
feature/be characterized by varied/various/diversified forms
be in a wide range of forms
be diversified in forms
vary in styles and forms
灵活方便(不限时间地点)
flexible and convenient
flexibility and convenience
We can study online anytime and anywhere we like.
We can study online whenever and wherever we are as long as we can have access to the Internet.
可反复观看
We can learn a lesson repeatedly until we totally understand/ take in what the teacher says.
满足个性化需求
meet every individual’s need
cater to students of all levels
customize online courses the way you want
消除/缩小城乡或区域教育差异
bridge the gap between urban and rural education
narrow the gap in education between developed and underdeveloped areas
A possible version:
Be Smart Online Learners
[ Good morning, everyone! I feel exceedingly privileged to stand here delivering/addressing a speech titled/themed “Be smart online learners”. ]
Online learning has become an important way to study recently. With an abundance of