内容正文:
读后续写讲评—
如何根据文本构思情节
——以雪山迷路读后续写为例
By the end of this period, students will be able to:
1. analyse the basic and deep information of the text
2. read and design the plot
3. rewrite the composition
Learning objectives
Suppose you were lost while travelling in the forest with your family without a phone ,what would you do ?
who
where
what
when
Read for the basic elements(para2)
I, a 12-year-old boy, my grandfather
and four other men
deep in the mountains of central Pennsylvania
got lost during an annual deer-hunting trip
How is the passage developed?
It is developed in the order of time.
Read for the personalities
To prove that I was qualified to join this male club, I got up and sated the work.
After breakfast, we left the warm and safe house and headed out into the dark, snowy morning, walking through deep snow.
brave/fearless/calm
clever/positive/
determined...
Which words can best describe the boy?And why ? Find out the supporting sentences.
Read for the theme
Q1:Why did my grandfather take me to an annual deer-hunting trip?
Because he wanted me to take the adventure to increase my courage and fun.
Q2: What could you learn from this trip?
He would increase my courage /gain experience/become braver /more mindful of where...
...
Raise questions for the continuous plots
I held my gun and immediately fired three shots._____________
____________________________________________________
Q1: What would you hear?
Q2:What would you think ?
Q3:How would you feel?
Q4:What would you do then? And how?
Q5:How do you write the last sentence of the 1st para?
Fired three shots .(开了三枪,fire: v.开火 shots:n. 射击)
运用“五所”提问,构思续写情节
what to hear/do /see/think/say
discuss
Twenty minutes/... later
Raise questions for the continuous plots
Finally, I found my grandfather and other men walking in my direction hurriedly.______________________________________________
the boy
what to say/do/hear
his