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假如你是李明,请根据下面提示写一封电子邮件,向你的外国朋友Mke介绍你最喜欢的中国
传统节日—春节。
提示:1,时间:一月或二月:2.活动:清扫、装扮房子、贴春联、放鞭炮等;3.意义:团圆。
要求:词数80左右。
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:介绍中国传统节日一春节
l.decorate装饰
审体裁:应用文(邮件)
2.put up Spring Festival couplets贴春联
审人称:第一人称和第三人称
3.set off fireworks放鞭炮
审时态:现在进行时
4.get together团聚
审要点:介绍家人在春节期间的活动
··,谋篇布局·搭框架。“·
点明主题
1.Dear Mike,
I am very glad to tell you something about Spring Festival.
2.We usually celebrate it in January or February.
变式:It usually comes
(在二月,但有时在一月)
3.Everyone in my family is very busy now.
传统节日
备春节
变式:Everyone in my family are very busy
4.My sister and I are doing some cleaning.
仿写:My sister and I are
(用sweep the floor代替)
5.My parents are decorating houses and putting up Spring Festival couplets.
变式:My parents are decorating houses with
6.During Spring Festival,family always get together
句子升级:During Spring Festival,.family always get together
(享用家庭聚餐)
7.Don't you think Spring Festival is interesting?I hope you can come to
表达感情
celebrate it with us some day!
Yours,
Li Ming
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Dear Mike,
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to tell you something
I am very glad to tell you something about Spring
about Spring Festival.
Festival.
We usually celebrate it in January or
It usually comes in February,but sometimes it
February.Everyone in my family is very
comes in January.Everyone in my family is
busy now.My sister and I are doing some
very busy at the moment.My sister and I are
cleaning.My parents are decorating
sweeping the floor.My parents are decorating
houses and putting up Spring Festival
houses with Spring Festival couplets.Then we
couplets.Then we are setting off
are setting off fireworks together.During Spring
fireworks together.During Spring Festival,
Festival,family always get together to enjoy
family always get together.
traditional family dinners.
Don't you think Spring Festival is
Don't you think Spring Festival is interesting?I
interesting?I hope you can come to
hope you can come to celebrate it with us
celebrate it wi