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模块写作专项
,。经典案例·细审题
假如现在是晚上8点钟,请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文,描述你和家人正在做的事情。
父亲
母亲
祖父母
妹妹
我
工作
阅读烹饪杂志
看电视
画画
看故事书
要求:1.词数60左右;
2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称」
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:描述家人日常活动
L.programme节目
审体裁:记叙文
2.read cooking magazines阅读烹饪杂志
审人称:第一人称和第三人称
3.enjoy the evening享受这个晚上
4.draw pictures画画
审时态:现在进行时
5.read a storybook看故事书
审要点:家人的具体活动
6.work on the computer在电脑上工作
,··谋篇布局·搭框架。。
开篇入题
1.It is eight o'clock in the evening.
2.My family are doing different things now.
句子升级:My family are doing different things
3.My father is working.
句子升级:My father is working
(在电脑上/在办公室/在家)
4.My mother is reading cooking magazines.
变式:My mother is reading
5.My grandparents are watching TV.
家人活动
详细描写
句子升级:My grandparents are watching
(favourite
programme)
6.My sister is drawing pictures.
句子升级:
Now she is drawing pictures.(favourite subject)
7.I am eating a delicious ice cream
仿写:lam
(画线部分用read a storybook代替)
表达感受
8.We are all very happy this evening
句子升级:We are all very happy.We are all
(enjoy the evening)
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。。落笔成文·赏佳作。。
1.0基础版
2.0提升版
It is eight o'clock in the evening.
It is eight o'clock in the evening.My family are
My
family are
doing different
doing different things at this moment.
things now.
This is my father.He is working on the
This is my father.He is working.
computer.My mother is reading a book about
My mother is reading cooking
cooking.My grandparents are watching
their
magazines.My grandparents are
favourite programme.My sister's favourite subject
watching TV.My sister is drawing
is art,and she is drawing pictures now.I am
pictures and I am reading a storybook.
reading a storybook.
We are all very happy this
We are all very happy.We are all enjoying the
evening.
evening.
,,,写作练笔·显身手。
假如现在是星期天早上9点,你的朋友们正在不同的地方做不同的事情。请根据图片内容,写
一篇英语短文描述他们的活动。内容可以适当发挥。
2207a00单
Ben;Park
Linda;Shop
Bill;Playground
Bob;Library
Ann:Her friend's house
注意:1.词数不少于60:
2.包括图中所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
It's 9 o'clock in the morning on Sunday.My friends are doing different things in different places.