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模块写作专项
,。经典案例·细审题·
假如Jck是你的好朋友,本周六是他的生日。他邀请你去他家参加他的生日聚会。请你根据
对他的了解为他挑选合适的生日礼物并送上生日祝福。
要求:1.词数60左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【审题指导】
【词汇储备】
审主题:为好友挑选生日礼物
1.a special birthday present一件特殊的生日礼物
审体裁:记叙文
2.give sb.sth.送给某人某物
审人称:以第一人称为主
3.go to the concert参加音乐会
审时态:一般现在时
4.choose sth.for sb.为某人挑选某物
审要点:挑选生日礼物及缘由
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谋篇布局·搭框架。
1.My friend Jack has a birthday party this Saturday.
引出话题
句子升级:My friend Jack has a birthday party
this Saturday..(闸明聚会地点)
2.I want to give him a special birthday present.
变式:I want to
3.He doesn't like music so he never listens to music.
仿写:
(用go to the concert替换画线部分)
挑选生日礼物
挑选礼物
4.He is good at sports.
变式:He
sports.(do well in)
5.I choose a football for him.
句子升级:I choose a football for him
(because)
表达愿望
6.I hope he likes the present and has a happy birthday.
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。。落笔成文·赏佳作。
1.0基础版
2.0提升版
My friend Jack has a birthday
My friend Jack has a birthday party in his house
party this Saturday.I want to give
this Saturday.I want to give a special birthday present
him a special birthday present.
to him.
He doesn't like music so he
He doesn't like music so he never goes to the
never listens to music.He doesn't
concert.He doesn't like CDs either.He does well in
like CDs either.He is good at
sports.I choose a football for him because he always
sports.I choose a football for him.
plays football with his classmates after school.
I hope he likes the present and
I hope he likes the present and has a happy
has a happy birthday
birthday.
,。。写作练笔·显身手““
My的生日快到了,她想在当天举行生日聚会。如何为她挑选合适的生日礼物呢?下表是她
的朋友们为Mary挑选的生日礼物以及缘由,请根据表格内容写一篇60词左右的英语短文。
Name
Presents
Reasons
Lingling
Some CDs
Likes singing songs
Amy
A dress
Likes going shopping
Bob
Two books
Likes reading综合阅读专项
Unit 2 She often goes to concerts.
4.点s well i道
I.1-5 CADBC 6-10 ACABD
图图思
5.because he alwuys plays football with his classmates after school
II.1-3 CBD 4-7 ADCC
【写作练第,显身平】
1.1.songs 2.magazines 3.film 4.choose 5.dresses
8.About 30)minutes./About half an hour.
Mary's birthday is coming.Her fri