Module 4 模块写作专项-【一本】2022-2023学年七年级上册英语同步训练（外研版）

139 模块写作专项 。经典案例·细审题“· 假如你是Liy,你的美国笔友Toy很好奇你的健康秘诀是什么，很想了解你的饮食情况。请你 根据以下提示写一篇短文，向他介绍一下你的一日三餐。 要点：L.早餐喝牛奶，吃面包和鸡蛋； 2.午餐吃面条或者米饭、蔬莱和肉： 3.晚餐喝蔬菜汤，吃水果。 要求：1.词数60左右： 2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。 【审题指导】 【词汇储备】 审主题：介绍自己一天的饮食 1.be good/bad for..,.对…有好/害处 审体裁：说明文 2.make sth.for sb.为某人做某物 审人称：以第一人称为主 3.stay healthy保持健康 审时态：一般现在时 4.have sth.for breakfast早饭吃某物 审要点：介绍一日三餐 5.remember to do sth.记得做某事 ,·。谋篇布局·搭框架。“· 开篇点题 1.To eat well is very important. 变式： 2.For breakfast,I have milk,bread and an egg. 变式： 3.Noodles,rice.vegetables and meat are healthy food. 句子升级：Noodles,.rice,vegetables and meat are healthy food 介绍一日三餐 介绍三餐 (be good for) 4.Don't have too much ice cream and cola 句子升级：Don't have too much ice cream and cola (because:be bad for) 5.I have vegetable soup and some fruit for dinner.They are good for my health. 句子升级： (合并为一句) 表达感受 6.Remember to eat well and you can stay healthy. 401 。落笔成文·赏佳作。 1.0基础版 2.0提升版 Hi,Tony.I am Lily.Do you know Hi,Tony.I am Lily.Do you know how to how to stay healthy?To eat well is very stay healthy?It is very important for us to eat important. well. For breakfast,I have milk,bread I have milk,bread and an egg for breakfast. and an egg.Noodles,rice,vegetables Noodles,rice,vegetables and meat are healthy and meat are healthy food.I have them food.They are good for us.I have them for for lunch every day.Don't have too lunch every day.Don't have too much ice cream much ice cream and cola.Don't eat too and cola because they are bad for our health. much in the evening.So I have some Don't eat too much in the evening.I have some vegetable soup and fruit for dinner.They vegetable soup and fruit for dinner because they are good for my health. are good for my health. Remember to eat well and you can Remember to eat well and you can stay stay healthy healthy. ,，写作练笔·显身手。· 现在的中学生，存在着饮食不健康的状况，比如不好好吃早餐，爱吃甜食和汉堡包等。请你根 据表格提示写一篇倡导中学生合理健康饮食的英语短文。 fruit,vegetables,noodles,meat,juice,eggs,milk,hamburgers,cola, 食物 ice cream 建议 have a good breakfast,be bad for,delic