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写作微技能
----with结构
with复合结构在续写中的运用
with复合结构” 即 “with+宾语+宾语补足语”,依附着句子而存在,起到丰富和充实句子内容的作用,因此,该结构有利于在续写中扩写句子。
在读后续写中,“with复合结构” 多用作原因状语或伴随状语,使得叙述的情节更具体;同时,在细节描写上使用该结构能形象、生动地营造画面,使得表达更深刻。掌握好以下关于“with复合结构” 的句型,将有效地助力读后续写。
1. The girl looked up with tears (in her eyes).
2. He fell asleep, with the light still on.
3. She walked out in the rain with her clothes all wet.
4. With the door and windows open, the room was very cold.
【探究总结】
with + n. +
形容词
副词
介词短语
表伴随
表伴随
结果状语
原因状语
, 主谓... .
1. With the teacher standing beside,she felt a bit uneasy .
2. With the boy leading the way, we finally found the splendid hotel.
3. With her money lost, she was at a loss what to do.
4. With her fingers cut, Joe burst into tears and her legs trembled.
5. With a lot of work to do,I couldn't go to see the doctor.
【探究总结】
With + n. +
v.ing 主动
v.ed 被动
to do(表将来/目的)
表原因
, 主谓... .
1)With nothing _______ to burn,the fire became weak and finally died out.
A. leaving B. left C. leave D. to leave
2)The girl sat there quite silent and still with her eyes _______ on the wall.
A. fixing B. fixed C. to be fixing D. to be fixed
3)I live in the house with its door _________ to the south.
A. facing B. faces C. faced D. being faced
4)They pretended to be working hard all night with their lights ____.
A. burn B. burnt C. burning D. to burn
把下列句子中的划线部分改写成with复合结构。
Because our lessons were over, we went to play football.
The children came running towards us and held some flowers in their hands.
My mother is ill, so I won't be able to go on holiday.
An exam will be held tomorrow, so I couldn't go to the cinema tonight.
With our lesson over
with
With my mother ill,
With an exam to hold,
除此以外,“with复合结构”还有其否定形式,即“without + 宾语 + 补足语”
The house caught a big fire last night, without anything left in it.
= The house caught a big fire last night, with nothing left