8 Unit 11 话题作文指导 -【学海风暴】2023-2024学年九年级下册英语（人教版）

Unit 11 话题作文指导 授课人：*** 九年级英语人教版·下册 1 英语课上，你们班的同学正在讨论暑假里如何去上海世博会(Shanghai Expo)参观一事，请根据下面的图表内容，以A（An）________ way to Shanghai为题，写一篇短文，陈述你们的讨论结果，并谈谈自己的看法。 注意： 1. 可以适当增减内容，要求意思、语句连贯； 2. 词数：80-100左右。 一、例文要求 A（An）________ way to Shanghai How to get to Shanghai by train; Comfortable; make friends… take a bus; cheaper; enjoy the beautiful scenes… your opinion c 一、例文要求 1. 审题 1）语篇类型：事物介绍； 2）主题语境：未来规划； 3）人称：第一人称； 4）时态：一般现在时； 5）词数：80-100左右。 2. 列举写作要点 1）陈述一下可行的交通方式； 2）自己的观点及理由。 二、技法点拨 3. 列出关键短语和句型 1）summer vacation, the most comfortable way, make friends, as well, take a bus, by bike, keep healthy 2）I prefer to go to Shanghai by bike. What’s more... Riding bikes can help us keep healthy and make us much stronger. 二、技法点拨 A Green Way to Shanghai My classmates and I have discussed how to get to Shanghai to visit the Expo during this summer vacation. Some of us think taking trains is the most comfortable way. We can make new friends and have more relaxing time as well. Others think it’s cheaper to take a bus. I prefer to go to Shanghai by bike. Riding bikes is a green way. It can not only help protect the environment, but also let us enjoy the beautiful scenes on the way. What’s more, riding bikes can help us keep healthy and make us much stronger. 三、范文展示 根据要求完成小作文。词数：30词左右。 整洁的环境离不开环卫工人的辛勤付出。请你代表学生会为社区清洁工人们送去一张卡片，表达对他们的感谢和祝福。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Thank you for____________ __________________________ Students’ Union 四、作业布置 Thank you for making our community more beautiful. Your work makes the streets cleaner, the air fresher, the city tidier and the environment more beautiful. Without you, we can’t have such a beautiful environment. Wish you healthy and happy every day! Students’ Union 五、参考答案 $$