内容正文:
2024届新高考英语
读后续写复习指导:
丰富人物动作描写
动作描写:有思路
I went to the hospital and saw a doctor yesterday.
Yesterday I got myself examined in the hospital. The doctor examined my throat, felt my pulse, tested my eyes and blood pressure. He also took my temperature, listened to the sounds of my heart and lungs, and checked my teeth. Then I had my chest X-rayed. After that, the doctor advised some treatment and some medicine.
Step1动作的拆解Step2精准的动词
男孩跳入湖中(游泳)。
词穷版:The boy jumped into the lake.
场景切换?位置移动?前有何必要动作?
冲向湖边 rush to the lake 脱掉衣服take off his clothes跳入水中jump into the water
升级版:The boy rushed to the lake,
took off his clothes and jumped into the water.
【浙江卷】骑行遇狼脱险Mac上了车
词穷版:Mac got in the car.
场景切换?位置移动?前后有何必要动作?
下自行车jump of the bicycle 冲向轿车dash into the car 关上车门close the door
升级版:Mac jumped off the bicycle, dashed into the
car and closed the door.
妈妈突然回家我拿起书读
词穷版:I took a book to read.
场景切换?位置移动?前后有何必要动作?
冲回房间run into the bedroom 找椅子坐 find a chair to sit down 抓起书读grab a book to read
升级版:I immediately ran into my bedroom,found a chair to sit down and grabbed a book to read,with my hands slightly shaking.
眼睛看:强调动作(从短到长)
glance扫视
He glanced at his watch.他看了一下手表。
watch观看、注视
She watched the kids playing in the yard.她看着孩子们在院子里玩。
gaze凝视
She gazed at him in amazement.她惊异地注视着他。
stare 盯着看
I stared blankly at the paper in front of me.我茫然地看着面前这张纸。
peer费力地看、盯着
He peered closely at the photograph.他聚精会神地端详着相片。
look into one's eyes直视某人
I looked into his eyes and said, ".我看着他的眼睛,说到.
头部动作/手部动作/腿部动作
强调动作(带有情感)
怒视glare 眨眼blink
The old woman glared at him.那个老妇人怒视着他。
When I told him the news he didn't even blink.
我把那个消息告诉他时,他眼都没眨一下。(否定形式表示“毫不意外”
强调结果
瞥见glimpse
She glimpsed a group of people standing on the bank of a river.
她瞥见一群人站在河岸上。
发现,注意到 find
notice
He noticed him standing silently over by the window.
他注意到他默默地站在窗旁。
spot
I finally spotted my friend in the crowd.
我终于在人群中看见了我的朋友。
discover on arriving home
I discovered they had gone.
我一到家就发现他们已经离开了。
认出 recognize
I recognized