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同步辅导·八年级上新目标版
单元话题作文·Unit10·针对他人的烦恼提出建议
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【写作任务】(Section B3c)
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假如你是李华,你校英语报“大家来帮忙”栏目收到一位叫Gace的同学的来信,信中
她诉说了自己的两个烦恼:1.刷短视频上瘾:2.总是熬夜,导致上课犯困。你作为该报实
习小编辑,请你写一篇英语短文,帮助她解决烦恼。
【审清题目】0
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内容:针对他人的烦恼提出建议。
文体:应用文。
时态:以一般现在时为主。
人称:介绍对方的烦恼及给对方建议时用第二人称:介绍自己的观点时用第一人称。
【头脑风暴】
描述烦恼
分析烦恼可能会带来的后果
针对他人的烦恼提出建议
分析烦恼原因
针对烦恼给出建议
【提供素材】
◆常用短语在横线上填写短语。
Problems
Consequences
Reasons
Advice
be
addicted to
have
problems with
lack self-control(缺乏
(1)
(去
(对……上瘾)
your
schoolwork,get
自制力),not use time
图书馆)more often,.
watching
short
short-.sighted(近视的)
wisely(明智地).
set your screen time
videos
have dry eyes...
limits(设定…限制
take
part in more
outdoor activities..
give up
your
bad
be in low spirits(没精
habits.
read
before
打采)feel tired the
get into bad habits.
bedtime
always stay up
next day,
play games,
watch
(3)
(制
(2)
(对
short videos...
订计划)for your
你的健康有害)…
studies and hobbies
()
(担
get enough sleep,
feel nervous(紧
(4)
(犯
心)the exam results,.
(6)
(听
张的)before an
错).do poorly in the
be afraid of letting
令人放松的音乐)
exam
exam
down,
be
not
fully prepare for your
well-prepared
exam ..
◆常用句型
Id like to give..some advice.
.I think /advise that...should...
·Why not..2
It's better for you to..
©共诸固被
It's important /necessaryto
【谋篇布局】
「将括号内的汉语翻译成英语,补全短女
◆称呼
Hi,Grace,
◆引出话题
I've leamed about your two problems,and I really want to help you.I'd like to give you some
advice.
◆描述第一个烦恼+烦恼带来的后果+分析原因并给出建议
Your first problem is that you are addicted to watching short videos.I think
2
(1)
(人们通过观看它们来放松是很正常的).But it's not good
to be addicted to it.If you don't give up the bad habit,you may end up getting short-sighted or
having dry eyes.(2)
(首先找出问题的原因很必要).You may
lack self-control,
so why、not
set your screen
time
limits foryourself
(3)
(如果你只是想通过看短视频交朋友),I think it's better for you to take part in outdoor
activities to make friends.
◆描述第二个烦恼+烦恼带来的后果+分析原因并给出建议
Your second problem is that you always stay up.As a result,
(4④)
(你可能第二天感觉到累).First,if you stay up because
you like to watch short videos,then solving the first