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高考读后续写细节描写
细节描写2
一、外貌与性格描写
1.外貌与性格描写的3个原则
(1)进行外貌描写时,可写对一个人的总体印象,也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特点进行描述。如技法三例题原文中第一段对妈妈性格的描写,采用了 loving,sweet,absent-minded 和forgetful等形容词,使一个可爱又健忘的妈妈的形象跃然纸上。
(2)可以具体描述人物的五官、着装,甚至可以配上动作描述。
(3)在描写人物片段时,可写你对人物印象最深的一两点。再加上一两句人物评价。
2.外貌与性格描写的高分素材
(1)外貌描写短语:
a double chin 双下巴
bushy/thin eyebrows浓眉/细眉
rough hands粗糙的手
deep-set/sunken brown eyes深陷的褐色眼睛
a pale face脸色苍白
a weather-beaten face 饱经风霜的脸
wear shoulder-length hair 留着齐肩发
a girl in rags 一个衣衫褴褛的姑娘
a middle-aged woman 中年妇女
be of medium height 中等身高
delicate looks眉清目秀
smartly/neatly dressed 穿着得体/整洁
be of slim/slender figure 苗条的身材
be of medium weight不胖不瘦
well-shaped body体形匀称
(2)外貌与性格描写好句:
He was a master of nonverbal humour.他是一位非言语幽默的大师。
She is of medium height and has a young and fresh look.
她中等身材,洋溢着青春、健美的气息。
He was tall and square-shouldered, with sleepy-looking eyes and a calm face.
他很高,肩膀宽宽的,两眼惺忪,神情镇定。
He is really optimistic! 他非常乐观!
She is not only very knowledgeable, but also very helpful.
她不但很博学,而且还非带乐于助人。
She is more patient and neater than I have ever been.
她比我更有耐心,比我更整洁
This is my best friend, a warm and kind little boy!
这是我最好的朋友,一个热心而又善良的小男孩!
Although his mother is sometimes strict, she has a gentle side
虽然他的妈妈有时很严厉,但她也有温柔的一面。
Under the sun, his eyes were as deep as a pool of water,flashing strong self-confidence.
阳光下他的目光像潭水般深沉,闪现出强烈的自信。
Her round face became pale, and her gray eyes had a warm and kind glow.
她的圆睑变得苍白,灰色的眼睛透射出热情与善良。
She is charming when she smiles.她笑起来的时候很迷人。
She is tall and slim with long hair reaching her waist.她又高又瘦,长发齐腰。
He is about 1.75 meters in height and has broad shoulder
他身高大约一米七五,省膀宽阔。
He has the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever seen.
他有一双我见过的最漂亮的蓝眼睛。
He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebrows.
他一对浓浓的眉毛下有一双又黑又大的眼睛。
My uncle is middle-aged and of average/medium height with a pair of thick glasses
我叔叔处于中年,中等身高,戴着一副厚眼镜。
His strongly-built body and suntanned skin make him look like a sportsman
他强壮的身体和晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。
He usually smiles a little and has