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策略三　精细打磨续写语言的4大途径 构思好续写情节以后，下一步就是进行续写。在阅卷时，阅卷老师首要关注的是续写的语言，因此必须注重提升语言表达的质量。首先要规避常见的语法和词汇使用方面的错误，确保拿到及格分；再次要尽力升级写作的语言，努力达到最高档。 途径一　词汇升级　亮人一眼 ●[词汇升级1]　笼统词→具体词 ①Because of her hatred, she looked at him. →Because of her hatred, she glared at him. ②As scheduled, we participated in several good activities. →As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. ●[词汇升级2]　简单词→高级词 ①The advice the old man gave Tom was very important. →The advice the old man gave Tom was very significant/vital/critical. ②I should be free any time after school next week. →I should be available any time after school next week. ●[词汇升级3]　单词→短语 ①Hearing the bad news, the boy cried sadly. →Hearing the bad news, the boy burst into tears sadly. ②After a day's work, we all tired. →After a day's work, we all worn out. ●[词汇升级4]　运用有表现力的副词 ①The day was bitterly cold；the moon was shining brightly in the sky. ②Having no choice, I slowly raised the book, hoping to hide myself. ③I was quietly, joyfully and patiently watching as the sun painted a brand­new day. ④On our way back home, my father held me tightly, wearing a big frown. ●[词汇升级5]　运用有表现力的介词短语 ①She gazed up at him, glowing happily. →She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness. ②Like a lamp，the moon shone from above. The stars twinkled their eyes curiously. →Like a lamp, the moon shone from above. The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity. 请用高级词汇升级下面考生续写中加黑的一般词汇 　　Moments later, Richard returned with a long ①big→　huge　 vine(藤). He tied one end of the vine around his waist and the other end around a big tree. He dived into the river and swam toward the girl and her dog. Since the water was muddy, Richard couldn't see clearly. However, he kept going. “Give me your hand，” he told the girl. Although the girl was afraid，she threw her hands and legs into the water and tried to get close to Richard and hold his hand. Richard used all his might and pulled the girl and her dog toward him. “Thank you so much！” the girl cried as she finally fell