内容正文:
2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(深圳专用)
第一期
专题08 书面表达10篇(中考真题+名校模拟)
一、讲稿
1.(2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频,打算做成视频日志(vlog),参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括:
1. 海边活动:
下午:①沙滩排球;②……;
晚上:搭帐篷;聚餐和清理垃圾;分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇解说词,属于演讲稿写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动,包括下午和晚上的具体活动,要列举具体的事例;
第三步,抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②