2024届高考英语作文复习：读后续写-语言提升 课件

读后续写-语言提升 Irene Yang 考查能力 具体描述 阅读能力 能理解原文内容 能深入理解原文的内容要素、内容发展、逻辑关系、语言特点等 写作能力 1. 内容产出 能在原文基础上创造新的内容 能与原文内容保持融洽，形成有效协同 2. 语言运用 能运用丰富的词汇和句子结构并且使用准确、恰当 能与原文内容保持融洽、形成有效协同（较高要求） 3. 篇章结构 能与原文合理衔接 能使用恰当的连接手段续写完整、连贯 思维能力 能在根据原文进行续写时体现创造性。 学习能力 能通过读后续写学习原文作者的语言和写作方式 第5档（21-25分） 1. 创造了新颖，丰富，合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度高。 2. 使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误少，且完全不影响理解。 3. 自然有效地使用了段落间，语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。 Continuation Writing Criteria (评价标准) No 2. High School Attached to Hunan Normal University Working out the skills S RR So embarrassed was Karie that she was afraid of looking into his father’s eyes. Skill I: Inversion I made an error which you didn’t find. Skill 1: Clause After pacing up and down restlessly in front of the teacher’s office for a while, she finally gathered courage and plodded in. After wondering nervously in front of the teacher’s office for a while, she finally gathered courage and walked into the office with her heart thudding. With eyes filled with tears, Karie couldn't help telling her father the whole thing. Explaining the skills as + ①Only then did I realize the importance of honesty. 只有那时我才意识到诚实的重要性 ②Only by working hard can you be admitted to your dream university. ②Only when he returned did we find out the truth. 只有当他回来时，我们才查明了真相。 n./adj. adv. + + Linking verb verb subject Skill I: Inversion (1) 否定词或词组 否定词: never, nor, neither, rarely, seldom, little, hardly … 否定词组: at no time, by no means, in no case, in no way, on no condition … + 助动词/情态动词/be动词 + 主语 + 谓语其余部分  1. Never have I tasted such a delicious cake. 我从未尝过这么美味的蛋糕。 2. Hardly had we reached home when it began pouring. 我们刚到家就开始下大雨了。 3. Not only did he make a promise, but also he kept it. 他不仅许了诺言，而且也遵守了这个诺言。 Skill I: Inversion (2) 1. So absorbed was he in the novel that he did not notice his father at the door. 他沉浸在了小说中，以至于没有注意到父亲在门口。 2. Such a cold day was it that I stayed indoors all day. 天太冷了，我一整天都没出门。 So/Such + be动词 + + Skill I: Inversion (3) 形容词(短语) 主语 + that从句 Attributive Clause