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Unit 6 At one with nature
Presenting ideas
Writing Topic: In harmony with nature
by Ada
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1.Definition:
A proposal
is a plan or an idea, which is suggested for people to think about and decide to take action to follow and is usually meaningful.
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2.Procedures for a proposal
(1)What:
(2)Why and How:
(3)A call to action again.
the background information, reason(s) and purpose of the proposal;
the contents and requirements of the proposal;
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3.Write a proposal
(1)假定你是学生会主席,请你写一份倡议书,向全校学生提出倡议要养成环保意识,让同学们明白保护环境使我们应尽的责任。
注意:①词数80左右。开头结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
②可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(2)Analysis of the composition
1)Writing style:
2)Writing topic:
3)Tense:
4)Person:
a proposal;
environmental protection;
simple present
first person
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(3)Outlining
Para 1:
Para 2:
Para 3:
表明身份+写作目的;
①保护环境的重要性
②大家应该采取的措施
再次倡议,表达希望
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(4)Useful expressions
①take action/measures to do sth.
②be good for/do harm to
③call on
④to begin with...
⑤in addition
⑥last but not least
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(5)The translation of composition
你想生活在美丽的校园里吗?
Do you want to live on a beautiful campus?
如果是这样的话,我们要记住以下几点。
If so, we'd bear the following in mind.
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(5)The translation of composition
首先,当我们不使用的时候,我们应该关灯,关水龙头。
To begin with, we should turn off lights and close the taps when we don't use them.
此外,我们应该乘坐公共交通工具,而不是汽车和出租车。
Also, we should take public transportation instead of cars and taxis.
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(5)The translation of composition
此外,不要乱扔垃圾,记得拒绝使用一次性筷子和塑料袋。
In addition, don't throw rubbish around and remember to refuse to use once-off chopsticks and plastic bags.
只有这样,我们才能使我们的学校更美丽。
Only in this way can we make our school more beautiful.
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(5)The translation of composition
让我们行动起来,为生态环境保护做一些贡献。
Let's take action and make some contributions to the environmental protection.
谢谢大家!
Thank you!
谢谢观看
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