2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写讲评课件

爱国是我们的责任，然而其方式有所不同。某英文报纸就此主题向中学生征稿，要求同学们谈谈自己平时是怎样做的，还有什么打算以及对爱国的认识。 It’s our duty to love our country. However, there are different ways to show our love. …… Model How to write the beginning? _______________________________________ feature Simple Clear Main idea 英语习作分析&评讲 1. A few days before Christmas, while enjoying coffees, my girlfriend and I noticed a woman trying to get her bank card to work. 2. “Do you know her?” I asked my friend. 3.“I do. Give me a minute. I’m going to go and see if I can help,” she replied, standing up to walk over to her. 4. A few minutes later, my friend returned to the table with the woman. The woman looked upset. Her eyes were swollen(adj.肿胀的), as if she’d been crying all night. She looked pale, tired, and messy. After I was introduced, my friend asked her if she was okay. She admitted she wasn’t and burst into tears. 5. I could sense she was a little embarrassed by her emotional response. Wanting to put her at ease, I quickly told her not to worry. I shared that I was a new mom with many troubles and I’d already cried fourteen times that day. She laughed but soon her tears were flowing again. 6. For the next forty-five minutes, my friend and I both sat and patiently listened to her. She lost her husband before Christmas and their bank accounts were now left nothing. As a stay-at-home mom of two, in one split second, her entire life had come crashing down around her. 7. We tried our best to cheer her up. My friend even tried to give her some cash, which she refused. When she finally got up to leave, she wiped her tears, thanked us both for listening, and walked out. As I drove home, I couldn’t stop thinking about how depressed she looked when she left the cafe. No one deserves to feel that sad, I thought, especially right before Christmas. There must be something I can do to help. I racked my brain (绞尽脑汁) for an answer. 读后续写四步骤 通读全文，理清脉络 理清情节，对应情&感 细读首句，构思主线 优化双线，着手写作 4 When Where Who Plot ( What