内容正文:
读后续写之关爱动物
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主题内容:救治动物/ 帮助动物/ 人与动物互相陪伴
常见地点:家中/ 街道/ 农场/ 野外
主题升华:陪伴/ 治愈心灵/ 人与自然和谐相处
Task1: Analyse the original passage
Who:
When:
Where:
What:
Why:
Result:
I , Matthew(my son), the doves
In the morning
the courtyard
The doves built a nest on top of the rubber tree, but in vain.
A strong wind blew, throwing the doves’ nest to the ground.
The wind destroyed all their hard work, but they started again.
故事情节(情节线+情感线):
I was recovering from an operation. (Beginning)
Matthew found a dove seated in a rubber tree. (Process)
The dove was back with a mate and began to make a nest.
The nest was blown to the ground, but the doves started again. (Climax)
I know I had to do something... (Resolution+Conclusion)
hopeless
strange/excited
touched
expectant
概括原文故事情节
I was recovering from a stomach 1.________(operate). Staying in bed all day and having stomachaches made me feel 2.________(hope) about the future. Suddenly, Matthew, my four-year-old son, found a white dove 3.________(seat) in a rubber tree. It sat there for a few months and then flew away. The next morning, the dove was back with its mate 4.__________(carry) sticks. During the whole week, they were busying 5.__________(they) with making a nest. Matthew was very 6._________(excite) and always talked to the birds while thye worked. Although filled with 7.______(sad), I look forward to the doves’ visits too. But 8.__________(fortunate), the rubber tree’s leaves were unstable. One night, a strong wind threw the doves’ nest to the ground. The doves didn’t fly away but started over and over again.
operation
hopeless
seated
carrying
themselves
excited
sadness
unfortunately
Task2: Predict the plot
1.构思情节
续写第一段情节:______________________________________
续写第二段情节:______________________________________
情感:________________________________________________
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