内容正文:
假定你是校英文报主编李华。你们报纸将开设一个新栏目 Vices of Youth。请你用英语在校报上写一篇栏目介绍,内容包括:
1. 开设目的;2.栏目内容;3.呼吁投稿。
注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题】
体裁:介绍文
时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
人称:可以第三人称为主,也可以第一人称为主
语气:formal
交际对象:全体学生
主题语境:作为校英文报主编,因即将开设新栏目Voices of Youth,由此写一篇推文介绍。
注意:栏目的名称Voices of Youth青年之声,说明对象主要还是以学生为主的,所以三个要点开设的目的,栏目的内容的围绕,以及呼吁投稿的对象都与学生有关。
关于落款和标题问题的解释:根据2021年6月浙江高考应用文阅卷信息,当时是最好有标题但是没有也不扣分,以后阅卷可能会关注标题这一块。然后关于署名的解释:可以有写by Li Hua但是其他不行比如Yours, Li Hua/English Newspaper。这里最好写一个标题,但是如果实在担心自己会写错,还是不写的好。
【谋篇布局】
首段:点明校英文报即将开设新栏目Voices of Youth,并引出开设的目的,这里的目的要围绕学生展开,最容易想到的就是给他们提供了一个平台来发声、表达。
思考:
Q1:如何结合Voices of Youth,来拟定一个合适标题?
Q2:开设目的可以怎么表达,用哪些词和词组?
1.In a worthy attempt to offer an amazing platform to voice students’ inner feelings and appreciate everyone’s precious youth, we’re thrilled to announce our newest column titled “Voices of Youth” is already set up.
2.Nowadays, youngsters’ voices play an important role in our society. For the sake of promoting their thoughts and voices as well as illustrating critical thinking, the school English Newspaper plans to set up a new column - Voices of Youth.
3.In a bid to make every single individual’s voice heard and spread worthwhile ideas, a brand-new column of Voices of Youth is established.
中段:主要来介绍一下栏目的内容,栏目内容围绕其中会包含的内容,有哪些方面(从……到……,ranging from…to…很实用)。此外可以适当点一下这个栏目能够在哪些方面帮助学生,以及具体是怎么做的,以吸引更多学生前来投稿。
1.As designed, the contents are multidimensional, ranging from outstanding adolescent speech to our students’ viewpoints about the school’s development. Besides, with specific themed activities held in school, in response, we’ll launch a relevant discussion, displaying the most insightful opinions on the latest newspaper, which enables other students to have a deeper comprehension of the topic and cultivate their ability to question from distinctive angles.
2.Serving as a platform for students to express their ideas, Voices of Youth welcomes any articles regarding students’ thoughts. They are expected to voice their opinions about some significant even