2024届高考英语读后续写专题训练讲义（2）

读后续写专题训练 李雨欣 一、解题思路： 1. 情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。 2. 细节-----进一步描述。 3. 转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。 4. 转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。 5. 失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。 6. 想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。 7. 结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。 8. 点题-----呼应前文 二、素材积累 ★转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰 1. It seemed as if/that someone was coming to save us. 2. Oftentimes our tears of remorse reveal a glimmer of hope. 3. A wave of relief flooded through me. . . 4. A wave of relief washed over him. . .1.ltsuddlyoccur1 ★失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题 1. But bad luck for me, I failed in my attempt to persuade her. 2. She closed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt to hold back the tears. 3. All our efforts were in vain. 4. She kept pacing, wondering what to do next. 5. With tears streaming down her face, she didn't know what to do next. 6. With tears streaming down her face, she was unsure of what to do next. 7. She was at a loss what to do. 8. He was in a dilemma about whether to do or not. ★想法：突然有了一个想法 1. It suddenly occurred to him that... 2. It hit me that I had a choice. 3. A thought struck her that. . . 4. It dawned that. . . 5. An idea occurred/came to me that 6. A ludicrous thought/idea flashed/came through Harry's mind. ★结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折 1. It didn't take long before. . . 2. It took some time before. . . 3. To my surprise enough, it turned out that... ★总结：点题，呼应前文 直到·······意识到 倒装句：Not until+时间状语＋did sb. realize/notice that+从句 强调句：It was only+时间状语＋that sb. realized that+从句 还记得某人的话： 1. One's words echoed/rang out in one's ears. 2. One's words/voice/lingered/whispered in one's mind/head 3. One's head was still full of. . . 经历与教训 1. What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson she taught me/I learned from her! 2. What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/ valuable experience I had! 3. Down deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had. Passage1：A Foothold in Life A dozen children ran around laughing and playing in my friend's yard, while we