内容正文:
读后续写
——挤牙膏
A.从底部开始卷着挤 B.从中间开始挤
C.从顶部开始挤 D.随便挤
本文以人物线索展开,讲述了作者和双胞胎妹妹玛丽一起生活了 18 年,她们彼此非常了解,一起享受快乐时光,唯独有一件事情让她们之间产生矛盾:挤牙膏问题。玛丽喜欢小心地折叠和卷牙膏管,而作者喜欢从中间抓住并挤压,两周后她们因为这一问题吵架。
第一段首句内容(Thankfully, we thought of a solution.)
第二段首句内容为(Years later, I had new roommates in college.)
续写材料回顾
1.合理构思续写情节。
2.准确理解文章意象,找准文章立意。
3. 学会如何处理同学和家人之间生活习惯的差异。
学习目标
2.写作能力。在内容产出方面,考生应在原文基础上创造出新的内容,并与原文内容保持融洽,形成有效协同的能力。在篇章结构方面,考生写作与原文合理衔接,并使用恰当的连接手段使续写完整、连贯。
1.阅读能力。学生理解原文内容,准确把握原文篇章结构和关键信息,深入理解原文的内容要素、内容发展、逻辑关系、语言特点等。
课标要求
To be fair, we bought two tubes of toothpaste-one for me to squeeze and one for her to roll. The trouble was over. And interestingly, I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. I also had to admit that to roll did keep the tube neater.
We bought two same toothpaste for our own. Firstly, I was so delighted because there was not Mary’s disturbing. So did Mary. From then on, we started to brush teeth alone. I was lonely without Mary’s accompany. In the end, we apologized to each other.
We communicate with each other calmly. Mary realized that squeeze in the middle could save strength and I knew roll the toothpaste could make good use of it.
Activity 1
Whose plot is the best? Why?
A
B
C
Thankfully, we thought of a solution. To be fair, we bought two tubes of toothpaste-one for me to squeeze and one for her to roll. The trouble was over. And interestingly, I once caught Mary squeezing when she thought I was just brushing my hair. I also had to admit that to roll did keep the tube neater.
第一段可描写作者和玛丽想出的解决方案的具体内容,以及处理后的结果。
解决办法就是尊重差异,买两支牙膏,都可以按照自己的想法挤。
A
Thankfully, we thought of a solution. We bought two same toothpaste for our own. Firstly, I was so delighted because there was not Mary’s disturbing. So did Mary. From then on, we started to brush teeth alone. I was lonely without Mary’s accompany. In the end, we apologized to each other.
B
本段重点也不在于给2种挤牙膏的方式分出胜负,只是方式不同,不用分出对错,不需要道歉。
2种挤牙膏方式的不同可以作为解决矛盾后的结果呈现出来。
Thankfully, we thought of a so