内容正文:
Writing:Changes
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
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Revision
Let’s review the changes about Candy Wang and Li Wen.
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Changes In the past Now
Personality She used to be ______. She’s not shy _________.
Behavior She didn’t use to be ___________in school. she gets lots of _________.
Activities She used to __________ with friends. It is almost _________.
shy
anymore
popular
attention
hang out
impossible
Candy Wang’s changes
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Changes In the past Now
Personality
Studies
Activities
Li Wen’s changes
much happier
works harder than he used to be
more outgoing
makes some good friends
felt lonely and unhappy
was absent from classes
failed the examinations
was shy and was not able to make friends quickly
became less interested in studying
How can we talk about a person’s changes ?
appearance
personality
hobby
study
others
Change
tall / short
heavy/ thin
straight hair
curly hair
long/short hair
Appearance
outgoing
shy
kind
friendly
active…
Personality
reading
singing songs painting pictures
exercising
playing games
Hobbies
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单元写作话题分析
本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事,以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等;描述生活中发生的变化,以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题:
①介绍自己现在和过去的变化;
②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化;
③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
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Write about how you have changed.
(1)What did you use to be like?
(2)What is the biggest change?And how did it happen?
(3)Which change is the most important one and why?
Writing
Listing列
Copying抄
Adding加
Connecting连
Analysing审
Beautifying美
person, tense, contents
outline(提纲)
add more information
linking words,
and,but
sayings, examples, vocabulary
写作步骤:
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person (人称 ) : __________
tense(时态) : __________
types and structure(体裁与结构):__________
第一人称
一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时
记叙文;三段式结构
Analyse
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Beginning
Body
Ending
topic
General introduction about your changes
The biggest change and how it happened
The most important change and why
Summary
appearance
(外貌)
personality
hobby
habit