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2024年新高考英语读后续写
近五年真题最新模拟题分析与写作技巧策略
2016浙江卷11月
夫妻野营争吵,妻子出走迷路
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CONTENTS
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读原文 划要素 填表格
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读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
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写句式 招招升级
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写句式 招招升级
水到渠成 范文赏析
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读原文 划要素 填表格
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One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp(野营) by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way to the lake, they started to quarrel because of some different opinions. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot(地点) for us to camp”, and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried.“Help!”
No reply. If only she hadn’t left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, as night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane started to miss her husband, Tom. She wanted to tell him how much she loved him.
2016年浙江卷真题原文
Jane rose(起身) at the break of day(黎明), hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a river. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes(浆果丛林). She drank and ate a few berries. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the river and hope it would lead her to the lake.
Fortunately,Jane heard a helicopter(直升飞机). Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse(衬衫), thinking that she should go to an open area and raised(举起) them if the helicopters came back again.
n. 特点 (adj./v./短语)
(主要)角色1 wife
(主要)角色2 Tom husband
背景事件 Jane and Tom quarrelled when camping.
微情节 (v.)
(adj.)
They quarreled and Jane left alone. (p1)
Jane was lost. (p2)
Jane walked along the river. (p4)