2024届高考英语一轮复习读后续写脱险类续写讲义

读后续写专题1 脱险类（讲义） 读后续写中会遇到描写森林迷路、地震、水灾、火灾等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成一定威胁的情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型”。在近年高考真题中，如2023年浙江卷1月蜂鸟脱困；2020年浙江卷1月遇到北极熊；2018年浙江卷6月森林遇险。 如何续写好此类文章呢？清代袁枚《随园诗话》中说过，“文似看山不喜平”，就提出过写文章好比观赏山峰那样，不喜欢平坦，喜欢起伏。而读后续写中，情节的跌宕起伏就是一种极好的提升文章整体水平的手法。这种转折即由“负”变“正”；或由“正”变“负”。最终体现正能量的结局，就是由“正”变“负”。 【写作步骤】 一 恶劣环境来铺垫 1. The water was deep and running fast from a big rainstorm the night before. 前天晚上下了一场大暴雨，水又深又急。 2. The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks as he was carried along. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose. 水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。 3. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. 更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。 4. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds. 天空阴沉，乌云密布。 5.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face. 寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。 6.The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face. 风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。 7.But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. 但后来，当我往远处看时，我发现有三四个大浪正在冲向海岸。 8.It swayed violently in a strong wind. Its roadway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blocked by many people. 它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。 9.The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there. 愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅。 二 心理感受来烘托 1. An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here. 一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。 2. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body. 看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。 3. Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. 盐刺痛了我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我能坚持多久。 4.Grief comes in waves. 悲伤如潮水一般涌来。 5. With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint. 最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。 6.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him. 她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。 三 外貌神态来烘托 1. Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.  听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。 2.Tears blurred her eyes. 泪水模糊了她的双眼。 3. I sobbed