内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
写一封劝告信
[对应学生用书P139]
劝告信是书信的一种,属于应用文文体。劝告信的主要写作特点是表达得体、语言简洁,让人能够愉快地接受。
[写作技巧]
1.提出问题——开门见山,说明写信的目的,提出发现的问题;
2.分析问题——分析问题并找到问题产生的原因;
3.提出劝告——找到问题产生的原因之后,接下来就要“对症下药”,即提出自己的建议或者劝告。
[原文示例]
请将教材本单元“Writing a persuasive letter”中的劝告信改写成一篇60词左右的短文。
[审题谋篇]
明确体裁、话题
体裁:应用文
话题:节约粮食的劝告信
确定时态、人称
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
布局文章架构
第一部分:写信目的;
第二部分:问题原因;
第三部分:劝告
列出核心要点
1.劝说参加“光盘行动”;
2.食物浪费严重;
3.劝说的具体内容
[词块积累]
1.号召call on
2.参加take part in
3.活动,行动n.campaign
4.浪费v.wast
5.提议,建议v.propose
6.点(酒菜等)v.order
7.剩余食物n.leftover
8.吃饭 v.dine
[语法运用]
1.我们写这封信是为了号召每个人都参加“光盘”行动。
We're writing this letter to call on everyone to take part in the Clear Your Plate campaign.
2.你可能不知道,世界上超过30%的食物被浪费了,与此同时许多贫困地区的人却没有足够的食物。
You may not know over 30% of the world's food is wasted, while many people in poor areas do not have enough to eat.
3.为了节约食物,我们建议:在学校食堂要根据自己需要适量点餐;在餐厅用餐时,少点食物,把吃剩的食物打包带回家;号召家人和朋友参加这项行动。
In order to save food, we propose: Do not order more than you need in the school canteen; order less and take leftover food home when dining in restaurant; call on family members and friends to participate in the campaign.
[连句成篇]
结合以上句子写一封语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的劝告信。
【参考范文】
Dear Friends,
We're writing this letter to call on everyone to take part in the Clear Your Plate campaign. You may not know over 30% of the the world's food is wasted, while many people in poor areas do not have enough to eat. In order to save food, we propose: Do not order more than you need in the school canteen; order less and take leftover food home when dining in restaurant; call on family members and friends to participate in the campaign.
With best wishes!
Class 8
假如你是李华,请你给你们学校的所有学生写一封80词左右的说服性信函,说明保护环境的重要性,提出现