内容正文:
Continuation writing :
Emotion Description
1. Learn to find out the difference between “telling” and “showing” in continuation writing;
2. Learn to taste and appreciate “showing” sentences;
3. Learn to create and write “ showing” sentences.
Learning Objectives(学习目标)
Let’s enjoy a short video
She is very sad
He is very angry
I am very nervous
He storms out of the room, slamming(狠摔) the door.
She stood silently, tears rolling down her cheeks.
Lowering down my head, I take a long deep breath.
which one is more vivid(生动)? which one can you get the picture?
tell=general description
show=detailed description
KEVIN
Don’t just tell
But !
Show
Step1:Observe and discover
Po is surprised, with its mouth open and eyes widening.
Step1:Observe and discover
LuFei is happy. He smiled from ear to ear, showing his white teeth.
Step1:Observe and discover
Chi-bi Marruko is sad. She cried bitterly, tears rolling down her cheeks/face.
Step1:Observe and discover
Pikachu is confused. With a frown(皱眉) on its face, it had no idea what to do.
Step1:Observe and discover
The little boy was scared. That horror movie made his hair stand on end.
Step1:Observe and discover
She felt so angry that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
Step1:Observe and discover
1)Po is surprised, with its mouth open and eyes widening.
2)LuFei is happy. He smiled from ear to ear , showing his white teeth .
3)Chi-bi Marruko is sad. She cried bitterly, tears streaming down her cheeks/face .
4)Pikachu is confused. With a frown on its fa c , it had no idea what to do.
5)The little boy was afraid. That horror movie made his hair stand on end.
6)She felt so angry that she could feel the blood rush to her face .
mouth
eyes
ear
ear
teeth
tears
cheeks/face
frown
face
hair
face
They are all________________!
facial expressions
Step1:Observe and discover
The kids jump with joy, waving their arms.
Step1:Observe and discover
He scratched(挠) his head , not understanding a word.
Step1:Observe and d