2023-2024学年牛津上海版英语九年级上册作文万能素材+范文讲义

上海九年级英语写作素材1个+范文2篇 1.1 写作素材hard work 作文结构 作文例句 开头：我曾经不擅长某门学科/事，列举原因，写出自己不擅长的点，随后下定决心改变 I was poor at _____ before I always got （不擅长/好的点）in the test I decided to get hard work to improve my_______（不擅长的学科/事） 要求： 根据题目所给的内容不同可以控制每一段的大小，详略大小 中间：用First，Then，Finally进行写作 1. First写出自己要努力的点并提供去做这个方法的实际行动 2. 初现成效，开始用Then，写出自己接下来更加要去做的目标，对自己充满信息 First：I start to（列举自己想要提升的事情两点） Then：I did the （前面所提到的事情的数量，两个就写two，三个就写three）things for a few days，I saw my （不擅长的学科/事）is better than before. It gave me confidence to get. hard work in order to improve more score in（不擅长的学科/事） 3.Finally是达成的目标，写出达成了什么目标，列如：成绩提升等，随后写出了达到这个目标的心情以及老师家人给予你的赞赏 Finally: So I got many hard work until the (重要日子去检测成果) to check my hard work in these days. At last，I got (成绩) in this test, So my hard word isn’t useless, My parents was proud of me，I felt so happy in this test First, then等可用可不用，可以分段，或者表明出明显进行下一阶段的用语 结尾：点题文章标题，表明hard work是有作用的，然后写出接下来需要继续努力进步，争取在下一次拿下更好的成绩 This thing tell us ：hard word isn’t useless, but you should to hold your line. I will keep working-hard to let my （不擅长的学科/事）to get better than before. 1.2 长短结构 作文题目 长短分配 _______ is good 当着重体验努力的过程时，需要主要体现中间的部分 ______ is improve me …… I can be better 主要体现如何变得更好的内容，主要体现如何如做？结尾时点题并再提出怎样更好去做 …… 2.0 范文两篇 2.1 I can be better. I was poor at math. I always think how I could improve it. After thinking for a long time, I decided to work hard to be better at math. First, I started to listen carefully in the class, because listening carefully can understand more knowledge than other students. Second, I started to understand the knowledge that I didn’t know before, it will let my math improve very large. Besides, I spent more time dealing with difficult problems. Both my parents and my teachers praised me for my chance, I think I can be better. At last, my hard work paid for. I got good marks in math. I think I can be better in the future. I will keep working-hard in order to get better marks. 本文讲述的是作者如何提升数学成绩的故事，语言简练没有生词。首先