2023届高三英语一轮复习读后续写写作思路指导3课件

一轮复习读后续写 写作思路指导3 Continuation writing 目 录/contents 文本 一、 解题指导 参考范文 评分标准 二、 三、 四、 2 文本 Kenji and I had been playmates for years. We were always together when we were free after school. One day, Kenji and I were on the beach of a lake in the woods. Suddenly, Kenji leapt up and called, “Hi, Rough Lock.” Rough Lock was an Indian man who Kenji knew well. He said hello to us and went back to his house. Kenji and I watched him till he disappeared briefly, then reappeared in front of the house. We could see him rocking in his rocking chair there. 一、 3 文本 Kenji ran into the water, pushing his log raft (木筏) out. He urged me to get on and pushed a pole into the sandy lake bottom to steady the raft. I stood there, hesitant. But Kenji promised he would not go far, pushing the raft close to shore. It sank(下沉） and touched bottom, moving unsteadily, as I climbed on. I got down on my knees behind him. Slowly, he pushed the raft out over the surface. The water was clear. I put my hand in it. As we pushed deeper, there was a sudden change in the temperature of the water. When I looked 一、 4 文本 up, the shoreline was farther away than I had ever seen. The water around us was sharply dark and the bottom could no longer be seen. So I thought it was enough and suggested going back. Kenji gave me an approving nod but tried the last push. One hard push, and-splash (哗啦)!-the pole(撑杆）jumped out of his hands as Kenji suddenly fell sideways. He fell into the water. In the sound of waves, Kenji’s head reappeared. He swam to the beach. Closer to shore, he stood up in the water, turning to face me. 一、 5 文本 “Jump!” he shouted. “I can’t! I can’t swim!” I responded. Then slowly he stepped backward till he was out of the water. I stared down into the deep water and back to where Kenji was standing. He signaled to me to jump again. I hesitated. Unexpectedly he turned suddenly and fled(迅速离开，逃跑） down the beach as quickly as he could. 一