内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
写一篇观察日志
[满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循]
一、课文范式推荐
二、话题素材积累
(一)开头常用语句
1.The whole body of a cactus is green.
仙人掌全身都是绿的。
2.I really want to know how the garlic grows up in the soil.
我真想知道大蒜是怎么在泥土里生长的。
3.Although bamboo is really a kind of grass, it looks more like a tree.
虽然竹子实际上是一种草,但它看起来更像一棵树。
4.Goldfish is a kind of good pet.It's very beautiful and I like it very much.
金鱼是一种很好的宠物。它很漂亮,我非常喜欢它。
(二)主体常用语句
1.Bamboo grows best in places where it is warm and rains often.
竹子在温暖多雨的地方长得最好。
2.The above is the green garlic bolt, the following white, like a long green onion.
上面是绿色的蒜苗,下面是白色的,长得很像一根长葱。
3.The cactuses have long roots and they take their roots deep into the earth so that they can get the water from deeper soil.
仙人掌的根很长,它们把根深深地扎入土壤中,以便从较深的土壤中获得水分。
(三)结尾常用语句
1.Sunflowers often have flowers facing the sun and grow well.
向日葵的花常朝着太阳,且生长良好。
2.With enough earth and sunshine, it will grow faster and better.
有了足够的土壤和阳光,它会生长得更快更好。
[满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影]
仔细观察下列有关竹子种植的图片,写一篇有关竹子成长的观察日志。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[谋篇布局]
[遣词造句]
1.在每个花盆的中央种上一粒种子。
A single seed has been planted in the center of each pot.
2.加水,把花盆放置在间接日照12-16小时的地方。
Water has been added and the pots have been put in a spot with 12-16 hours of indirect sunlight.
3.这样做的目的是防止种子被晒伤。
The purpose of it is to protect the seeds from burning.
4.每个花盆每天都浇水。
Each pot has been watered daily.
5.茎上有几片叶子,叶子又长又窄。
Several leaves are on the stem, which are long and narrow.
6.花盆被放置在间接日照至少6小时的地方。
The pots have been placed in a location with at least 6 hours of indirect sunlight.
7.直接照射的阳光会灼伤竹子幼苗。
Direct sun will burn the bamboo seedlings.
8.它的茎已经长到大约30厘米高,每个茎上都有许多绿叶。
The stems have grown to around 30 centimetres tall and each has a number of green leaves.
9.竹子已经从花盆中移植到开阔的土壤中。
The bamboo plants have been tr