内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
写一篇观察日志
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[满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循]
一、课文范式推荐
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二、话题素材积累
(一)开头常用语句
1.The whole body of a cactus is green.
仙人掌全身都是绿的。
2.I really want to know how the garlic grows up in the soil.
我真想知道大蒜是怎么在泥土里生长的。
3.Although bamboo is really a kind of grass, it looks more like a tree.
虽然竹子实际上是一种草,但它看起来更像一棵树。
4.Goldfish is a kind of good pet.It's very beautiful and I like it very much.
金鱼是一种很好的宠物。它很漂亮,我非常喜欢它。
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(二)主体常用语句
1.Bamboo grows best in places where it is warm and rains often.
竹子在温暖多雨的地方长得最好。
2.The above is the green garlic bolt, the following white, like a long green onion.
上面是绿色的蒜苗,下面是白色的,长得很像一根长葱。
3.The cactuses have long roots and they take their roots deep into the earth so that they can get the water from deeper soil.
仙人掌的根很长,它们把根深深地扎入土壤中,以便从较深的土壤中获得水分。
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(三)结尾常用语句
1.Sunflowers often have flowers facing the sun and grow well.
向日葵的花常朝着太阳,且生长良好。
2.With enough earth and sunshine, it will grow faster and better.
有了足够的土壤和阳光,它会生长得更快更好。
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[满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影]
仔细观察下列有关竹子种植的图片,写一篇有关竹子成长的观察日志。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[谋篇布局]
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[遣词造句]
1.在每个花盆的中央种上一粒种子。
A single seed has been planted ________________ each pot.
2.加水,把花盆放置在间接日照12-16小时的地方。
Water ______________ and the pots _______________________ with 12-16 hours of indirect sunlight.
3.这样做的目的是防止种子被晒伤。
The purpose of it is _________________________________.
in the center of
has been added
have been put in a spot
to protect the seeds from burning
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4.每个花盆每天都浇水。
Each pot ______________________.
5.茎上有几片叶子,叶子又长又窄。
Several leaves are on the stem, _________________________.
6.花盆被放置在间接日照至少6小时的地方。
The pots have been placed in a location __________________________________________.
has been watered daily
which are long and narrow
with at least 6 hours of indirect sunlight
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7.直接照射的阳光会灼伤竹子幼苗。
Direct sun _________ the bamboo seedlings.
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